Sumi H. Inkblot

Ah! No! :flails helplessly: People are reading this crap! >.>UUUUU I feel so awful....>.< Anyway, erm, thanks for said, I really, really need to re-write this....:shivers at horribleness of writing:

You spoke too soon. Wink Leave it to Sir Fand to deliver the well-deserved punctuation rebuke. I'm always speaking too soon. I should just wait until I die and then ...

:shock: Um, thanks everyone! This was much better feedback than I expected, good-bad wise. ^_^ (Not even a punctuation rebuke, the lacking? Wow!) Anyway, thank you! ^_^ Sumi

Ummm, see above post. ^ I think I can only get you to see this through example, so I'll re-write a couple of parts for you. Dear Summer Carding, Were ...

I said... "person"....not "man", Snoink. XD I guess I missed it during the comb. I can say I'm not winning this one. Hmmm. By the way, excellent review. It made ...

:points at signature: The elders of YWS have many valuable things to teach us. :P Indeed, the YWS is a brilliant advantage. :hugs YWS:

I personaly liked the books, though y'all make good points that i have to agree with. Still, don't forget the author was only 19 when he wrote Eragon, so don't ...

XD Thanks guys. So, it was a.... dream? It happened in Lucas' dream, but when he got stabbed it happened in the dream and it happened in real life where ...

Sigh, you're right. I haven't devoted many words to character development. :P It's been 13k words of magical actiondump. XD Ah, Ratchet, you're a good reviewer. You point out the ...

Sumi = diehard HP freak :smt045 :smt083 :smt081 :smt082 The point of that rather weird scene is to say that the Geezer literally exploded, using magic, he was so angry. ...

La, thank you, Tri. ^_^ This is only the first draft. (Of the prologue!! I've got so much work to do on this....:lol: ) Per your suggestion, I've decided to ...

Haha, thanks guys. ^_^ (Aet's right. I had that horrible habit of capitalization after dialogue that drove Aet and CCM-chan up the wall...) Gargoyles w00t! XD Thanks again! sumi

This is arglesnarkleful! LOL I hate to be one of the "omg I love it" people, but I really have nothing to add. It's just beautiful. (

Wow.....0-0 I posted this like a month ago and it's still getting reviews. LOL. Thanks, guys, I appreciate it muchly! ^_^

Dude. Avril Lavgine (sp) ate luv54's head! RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!